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The idea was decent, sounded like some nice Hardstyle, but you screwed up the mixing a bit.
The kick does not need to be that loud, all you have to do is use Fast Dist, and use Compressor to make it seem loud, then sidechain a bass to it and you got a good hardstyle bassline.
The melodies were decent, but I'm expecting you to improve, don't let me down.
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No booming kick with sidechained bass... a few decent melodies, but there's a beat missing there buddy.
Try adding a nice booming bass drum with a nice side chained bass, then talk to me about Hardstyle.
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"MTV Music Generator for PC"
Sorry but that doesn't cut what I'd called "original music," good idea but try actually doing the instruments yourself.
Sorry this isn't great at all, just sounds very unorganized, fake, sampled, and something that any noob with FL Studio could do in a few minutes with slayer, ftp, and boobass.
Maybe next time
Author's Response:
I'd try "actually doing the instruments" myself, if I, y'know, HAD them.
do bear in mind, darling, that I was still relatively new to the program. my songs DO get better.
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This track is really fucking amazing, best work ever by you.
Make more!
Author's Response:
I can always count on you to review it, eh? :P
Well... You're the only one :(
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Your style is definitely well structure and creative, thanks for sending me this over AIM but if you go by my suggestions I gave you it'd be a better song.
Also, a little advice, don't use the same melody over and over again, break it down, add something new, like make piano chords or something to add to it, or just create a new melody with a different synth.
I can honestly say I'm enjoying your new work, it's showing a lot more potential than I have at the moment, and you're definitely getting better with each project you finalize.
Nice job man, keep up the good work, and remember there's always room for improvement.
Author's Response:
thanks for the review and see you on aim :)
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"Glad to see a classic is back"
Take the advice I gave you on AIM, and improve it in that way if you can.
Not bad, much more interesting than Summer Break.
Author's Response:
lol I'll try.
Thanks for the review dude.
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Because you're awesome this get's a 5, but next time I get on my comp I'm giving you a shitload of FX for you to use in this song so it doesn't seem as bland.
Needs more fx, and I'll help you ASAP.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review dude!
btw where is my FX at? hahahhaha
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Well Tom, I guess this is exactly why you stick to flash, and stick to making this website better.
Sorry mang but this really sucked my snuffaluffagus.
But I'd be glad if you'd check my stuff out. =]
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"Reminds me of the Mario boss levels from Mario 64"
Amazing quality, great mixing, great synths, reminds me of Mario 64 when he had to battle Bowser on those levels that lead up to a pipe where you had to go down to face him.
Very epic, great kicks, great drums.
Would've liked to have seen a little hat distortion but that feature doesn't even mean anything compared to the art that is this song.
Great submission Bjra, you really have outdone yourself this time. ^_^
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review my hardstyle amigo!
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Very interesting, I like the style, mixed very well, great melodies, very addicting to listen to.
I actually am downloading this. great song man, we should collab sometime.
Author's Response:
Wow! Thx a lot!
We'll go see your work and we'll talk!
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